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Aqua Beauty

Here's an image which I recently photographed and retouched. Your comments and guidance to improve would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

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Phil, it is nice!
I think the skin color on across the image is slightly different - I am seeing a much yellower patch on her shoulder behind the hand and I would also work on the hair line a little further (D&B and color corrections). Overall, I am a big proponent of always aiming to capture an emotion, or get a little more dramatic pose to add interest to the image.

Thanks Julia for taking the time to have a look and give me your feedback. I must admit I didn't notice the yellow patch until you pointed this out. Creating an even skin colour is something for me to work on. I have other images from this shoot which I'll experiment on. Here is an image which was retouched by someone else from the same shoot.

It's pretty cool!
The only area that needs a little bit more attention IMHO is the shadow on her right cheek (camera left).

Hi Phil Jones,
nice to see your image, if you don't mine can i retouch your 2nd image..
please send me on (niteshbj@gmail.com)

Hi Nitesh. I'll email you a RAW image from the shoot soon.

Just had an after thought that you may like to see the behind the scenes video from this shoot! Hope you like it. https://youtu.be/69oFOx6Hh-A