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2.2 - "Needs Work" 

Ruxy

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Awesome photo. Only criticism would be to maybe crop in a little more. No need for the white brick wall on the right and a little less concrete on the bottom

Agreed. I'd love to see a square crop of this, or maybe even a crop where the door on the right is cropped out. Yes you'd lose depth, but it just feels distracting otherwise I think and you keep some of that on the left still.

Thank You. I appreciate the advices. Indeed needs a crop, but I wanted to be wide, I've tried to Photoshop in the right side but It looked very unnatural. I will try to cropi it and to fix the ground. Thanks again for the advices!

You can crop this so that the model is in the left third of the image and it ends just before the white tiles on the right. Fill in the white door strips with the same brick pattern.
In camera, it would have totally worked if you took two steps to the left.