The first one has an awkward ribcage bump. Her tattoo draws your eyes to it and it is the only thing I can see after that. If you were trying to show off the tattoo, then good pose, just adjust her a little to avoid that weird bump.
The second picture is beautiful and soft. Her tattoo is less eye catching and her face is the main focus (Maybe second). The only thing I would say is try to show the legs fully. There may be a reason you cropped the way you did, but just a personal preference.
I see the point about the bump, but don't find it too distracting. Different bodies and all that. Overall it is a nice pose and good choice of foreground fall off and background.
The first one has an awkward ribcage bump. Her tattoo draws your eyes to it and it is the only thing I can see after that. If you were trying to show off the tattoo, then good pose, just adjust her a little to avoid that weird bump.
The second picture is beautiful and soft. Her tattoo is less eye catching and her face is the main focus (Maybe second). The only thing I would say is try to show the legs fully. There may be a reason you cropped the way you did, but just a personal preference.
Like the matching colors and patterns in the background and tattoo,
Agree on the hump, sitting pose may have been better. Like the soft light.
2nd one is a bit "flat" for my taste.I'd also have cropped of the right partand positioned her left arm different.
I see the point about the bump, but don't find it too distracting. Different bodies and all that. Overall it is a nice pose and good choice of foreground fall off and background.