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2.24 - "Needs Work" 

Lit with 2 Godox ad600 pros, shot at f8 1/1600 iso 200 to get the texture in the flames. A7r4, 24-70 gm at 24mm.

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unusual for sure. and the lighting is nice, perhaps I would have liked a bit more a a fire/orange glow in the pic. but the details in the flames are very nice.

that said though;

the pose isn't that great, the knee being there I'm not so sure about.. her holding the guitar in this way, which obviously doesn't look her playing the guitar in any way. (at least have the model hold a music chord on the guitar instead of just holding it)

The angle I like, but not the fact that I can see the backdrop and parts of the studio. or the dirt on the floor.

I also don't think the gas hose should be there, perhaps run it from the back, hidden mainly by her dress instead of it being on the floor.

Perhaps it could also be remotely operated instead of the model pressing the lever that is duct taped on the guitar.

Thanks. Leaving the dirt and the hose and the background was intentional.

Competent, but lacking "oomph". I would have liked to have seen more fire, more aggression, more >something<>