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1.94 - "Needs Work" 

portrait of a gent named Will, shot was taken in an aircraft hanger, which was part of a modelling event I covered, this shot was taken using the huge hanger door as natural light, with fill light from other planes in the hanger

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My eye is drawn to the bright point next to the model - trying to work out what it is...

hay man, left side of model is the propeller of the plane he was standing close to

Now you say that, I can see the shape - maybe including more of the propeller would have made the storey of the image stronger.

thanks man, my crop I think was a bit crap, or rather my framing, on the full size the propeller on the left is just a tiny bit more wider so still does not show the amount of detail I believe you have in mind, think what I should have done is take a step to the right and reframed the subject a bit better allowing more of a flow from subject to propeller and plane, angles man they always get me