Hi Jack,. So this is a little tough love. This would be one of my favorite abstracts post here to date. But ... You have to clean the vase. Dust, a spider web (or hair) and smudges on the surface take the attention away from the beautiful lines. I hope if this is your vase you can reproduce the shot because it could be a winner!
Hi Jack, Indeed minimalist and abstract. A very good composition of grey tones. However, did you ever felt the highlights at the left corner disturbing? and for that matter even the tonality of central element? please share whenever you can.
Hi Jack. At my individual perception, the lighter tones at corner were taking away my attention from the beautiful central composition. Thats about me. thanks for reverting back.
Nice abstract, Jack! I like the flow, and the play of light throughout.
Hi Jack,. So this is a little tough love. This would be one of my favorite abstracts post here to date. But ... You have to clean the vase. Dust, a spider web (or hair) and smudges on the surface take the attention away from the beautiful lines. I hope if this is your vase you can reproduce the shot because it could be a winner!
Hi Jack, Indeed minimalist and abstract. A very good composition of grey tones. However, did you ever felt the highlights at the left corner disturbing? and for that matter even the tonality of central element? please share whenever you can.
good points
I did not feel that the highlights are disturbing. In what way were you disturbed?
Hi Jack. At my individual perception, the lighter tones at corner were taking away my attention from the beautiful central composition. Thats about me. thanks for reverting back.
I also feel the two bright triangles in the upper left are too bright and draw the eye away from the center pretty curves.