Thank you for joining our group and posting! I think you are off to a great start in minimalism/abstract!
This group will often take a screen capture of a post to edit in order to explain feedback. I hope that you are ok that I did that here. I think that both of these would benefit from B/W. These are really great "shape" shots and it would be interesting to see how they do if stripped of everything but the shapes.
I could be totally off base! These are just suggestions. I was just thinking that they might have more impact this way. This is not a great edit - just for example!
Again - nice job!
:)
PS - I also suggest critiquing other's work. It helps educate your eye to this type of thinking so you can apply it to your own work. And we all appreciate it!
Hi Zura!
Thank you for joining our group and posting! I think you are off to a great start in minimalism/abstract!
This group will often take a screen capture of a post to edit in order to explain feedback. I hope that you are ok that I did that here. I think that both of these would benefit from B/W. These are really great "shape" shots and it would be interesting to see how they do if stripped of everything but the shapes.
I could be totally off base! These are just suggestions. I was just thinking that they might have more impact this way. This is not a great edit - just for example!
Again - nice job!
:)
PS - I also suggest critiquing other's work. It helps educate your eye to this type of thinking so you can apply it to your own work. And we all appreciate it!