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Charles Mercier's picture

Inside and out.

Not sure the second one works that well especially in terms of depth.

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I actually prefer the second as an abstract, but my eye wants the windows on the left to be vertical.

I see where you are headed wit the first but there are too many confusing/distracting elements for me.

Sure, but if you really look up at buildings, the lines do converge. (I corrected it slightly for you anyway.)

Yeah, always a problem.
Your update is a definite improvement for my anal need for verticals. This I blame on my shipwright father 😊

Haha. Well, nobody's perfect!

I think I agree with Alan on the first one. I do like the idea. I LOVE the second one! Reminds me of a house of cards.

With the first one, the group IS abstract and experimental! 😁

Tried exploring other possibilities of depth. quick cleaning and editing just to share a view point. Open for comments.