The first photo:
-- it’s out of focus
-- avoid showing only the thumb. Either show most (if not all) of the hand, or none of the hand.
-- instead of doing the corner eye look, work on just nailing a pretty decent straight on headshot.
-- lastly, avoid shooting on railroad tracks. :) It's just way overdone.
The third photo:
-- try shooting eye level instead of shooting down on them.
-- try to capture dynamic, funny, or cute moments. They are kids, they have lots of those. :)
-- some basic examples below:
The first photo:
-- it’s out of focus
-- avoid showing only the thumb. Either show most (if not all) of the hand, or none of the hand.
-- instead of doing the corner eye look, work on just nailing a pretty decent straight on headshot.
-- lastly, avoid shooting on railroad tracks. :) It's just way overdone.
The third photo:
-- try shooting eye level instead of shooting down on them.
-- try to capture dynamic, funny, or cute moments. They are kids, they have lots of those. :)
-- some basic examples below:
https://images.squarespace-cdn.com/content/v1/5373b147e4b0e5824b359a50/1...
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https://www.lovethispic.com/uploaded_images/177984-Girl-On-A-Swing.jpg