Ada Outdoor by Pawel Paoro Witkowski
Pawel Paoro Witkowski's picture

Ada Outdoor

Image Details
85mm · f/1.8 · 1/160s · ISO 320
Taken On: 
July 4, 2016 - 9:15am
July 7, 2016 - 2:51am
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7 Comments

Mike Mendoza's picture

Wow! Nice capture!

Bill Peppas's picture

This is a very nice shot.
I would however:

Reduce the highlights in the background
Remove the terrible chromatic aberration that is visible even in the small preview between the shirts & the bra straps

Pawel Paoro Witkowski's picture

Yeah, you're right :) Actually I did remove bra straps after I added this photo, but didn't update this photo here. I do like overexposed highlights in the background, but when you mention aberration I realised that apart from purple fringe, there is also a green fringe I usually skip over heh, good catch :)

Pawel Paoro Witkowski's picture

Ohh and to be honest, I don't really know why people like this photo that much :( I put it here because there were lot of likes over it, but I can't figure out what is more appealing than other photos from my PF :( Is this really all about bluring background? :/

Bill Peppas's picture

You have harmony on your color palette here.
The rimlight helps focusing the viewers eyes on the girl.
She's got nice blue eyes ( I guess you can make them pop a little more, you haven't overdone it! ).
The background separation is very good and the bokeh is smooooth.
The pose and the girl is nice.
You didn't overprocess this to a "plastic skin" look which a lot of people dislike including me.
And the girl looks like a "girl next door", for some reason she is making me feel "warmth" and good about her, this photo of her says "come talk to me, I'm a good girl"

Pawel Paoro Witkowski's picture

Yay thanks for deep explanation :) <3

Bill Peppas's picture

You're welcome, I love giving feedback ;)