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2.75 - "Solid" 
Ian McGrath-Santowski's picture
Ian McGrath-Santowski

Breathing it all in

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Paulo Noversa

Amazing

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Ian McGrath-Santowski's picture
Ian McGrath-Santowski Paulo Noversa

Thank you so much! I was really proud of how the texture of the smoke turned out.

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Kevin Vierwind

I really like the concept of this one. just to leave so constructive critique i think it could be better from another angle and also i got the feeling that the face isn't centered but a couple of px to the left. I do really love that lighting.

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Ian McGrath-Santowski Kevin Vierwind

Thanks for the feedback. Will make sure to test different angles. The thing about this photo shoot is that my AP2D Art teacher was sort of going against the rules and letting my friend smoke in the studio at our school. In fact she was in the corner by the smoke alarm fanning away the smoke to ensure that the alarm didn't trigger. So if the fire alarm wasn't that much of a problem, I think I would've had more time to mess around with different angles

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