This is pretty good, but it's frustrating close to really good (keep in mind that I intend this as CC, and you're still likely doing better than I would if I were shooting this topic). I would prefer to see this shot more at "eye level" as the perspective distortion tends to make the model look "hippier" than she already is.

Or I'd like to see the angle made more extreme. Do you have images from this shoot like that?

Lighting and composition are good (very painterly, which i like) as well as the smoke. There's an enormous amount of potential here.

Could you let us know what you did to gt the mist/smoke? I'd like to steal that technique.

Is it ok to cut her toes like that?