The shot taken in Polish Mountain. Sony A9, Samyang 24mm, 1/500, f2.8,ISO 50, No flash, natural light, basic CaptureOne's edit using layers.
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I'd say crop in a little tighter. You don't need the dark empty space on the left or the dirt on the bottom of the frame. They're swallowing up your main subjects.
um... 'dirt on the bottom'? aka 'a pathway'..
uh... 'dark empty space on the left' aka 'shade of the tree(s), framing the 'subject'...
Altho it is a bit over-contrasted, the cropping and feel of the image is excellent! I can swallow up the 'main subjects' with my eyes and imagination of their joy, being in nature after a post wedding haze.
Sounds like you just got divorced?!
LOL. This is a photography website, not Psychology Today. How about we keep the comments constructive and mature? Trust me, you couldn't psychoanalize if gave you an outline.
I'm looking at this from a compositional point of view. And, I said what I said. It wasn't a personal attack, most especially against you, so why do you feel the need to defend it with so much hostility and condescension? Hold your hands over the parts I mentioned and tell me if that doesn't change the composition while keeping SOME of the same elements.
By the way, I noticed the images in your portfolio haven't gotten very many votes. I'd be happy to critique your work as well, if you're interested.
Indeed, this is a 'photography website'! Thanks for the information...
...my insight, regarding your comment, of which, was not 'constructive', rather, a vapid word salad, lacking any critique, was a suggestion with a twist of joking at the end, since it is a Wedding Photography' contest submission.
Your comments referred to elements of the, already perfectly cropped image, as 'dirt and empty space', of which, led me to believe that you are divorced and that those words, psychoanalytically speaking, refer to your past marriage.
I am not here for votes on my posts. I get plenty of vote$ by my client$... I just like posting here for the draw$ to my site, and I like this site for making comments to comments like the one you made about the 'dirt' and the 'dark empty space' of Damian Bereza's 'swallowing up' of his main subjects... was super sadly funny!
As well as your hypocritical comment to me about 'constructive and mature?'..."This is a photography website, not Psychology Today." Thanks for your maturity! And for noticing my 'portfolio'.