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Sebastian Jaramillo's picture

Urban Nature

Hi guys, I am a recent member of this amazing comunity and would love some feedback or critics to this photo I took a couple weeks back.

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Welcome to Fstoppers.com!!!! Hope you like it here! I love the silouette of the bridge and the trees, and the natural (or unnatural) framing with the symmetry of the bridge but the natural shape of the tree. I'm not sure if the graphitie adds anything to the photo, so i would experiment with that. Great photo!!!!!! Well done

I will take a look of the image w/o the graphitie, thank you for your comments and your kindness.

Love this. Was the tree added on post or it was frame on actual shot? This is great.

It is the actual frame. It´s a bridge, and in the middle of it there ir this tree. Btw I´m glad you like it, thanks :)

First of I want to start off with well done. Second, here's my feedback on this photo.

Technical - Great use of lighting, I can tell this is 2 stops under expose. I don't know if you shot this in M mode but the technical aspect is well executed.

Composition - I love the centered feel on this image. The eye definitely brings me to the center of the image. The first impression I got is "is the tree photoshoped?" but you clarified that. I wonder how will the hole scene look if it was landscape. There's definitely a sense of mysteriousness on the graffiti. The composition is definitely well executed.

Impact - I honestly can say that if this was in color, the impact would've been strong. Great job on deciding to turn this into black and white. This photo gives a great story like nature vs humanity type of thing. I would even call it something around that aspect. Overall great impact on the image.

This is merely a feedback coming from someone that cares. I hope you can take this as constructive criticism and use it to better your craft. I hope to see more of your images here. Keep on shooting and mastering those three elements.

Thank you so much Isaac. I´ll consider every word of your feedback, you have been very kind on taking the time to write this. Right now I´m just trying to get better, cause of that this will be very helpful.