Hey Zach! First of all, it's nice to see someone doing the same type of photography I'm doing. You should check out some of my rock climbing gym photos for their ads. Anyways, as for you. I like the drama and the composition and the lighting of the photo. A couple of things you may want to consider, i like the idea of symmetry here, but the rope and the lights being different sizes detracts from that a bit. You also may want to consider going one of two routes with photos for their advertising, either an artistic approach (like you did here) with drama and action, but not showing much of the facility, or showing the facility in a pleasant view making it look welcoming and comfortable. Decide what your subject is supposed to be and really dedicate yourself to that. Personally, the facility i shoot for is inferior to competition, so i typically shoot an image more likely to grab someone's attention for them to read the poster. Here is an example. Overall, awesome image with only a few simple improvements you could make. Well done.
Hey Zach! First of all, it's nice to see someone doing the same type of photography I'm doing. You should check out some of my rock climbing gym photos for their ads. Anyways, as for you. I like the drama and the composition and the lighting of the photo. A couple of things you may want to consider, i like the idea of symmetry here, but the rope and the lights being different sizes detracts from that a bit. You also may want to consider going one of two routes with photos for their advertising, either an artistic approach (like you did here) with drama and action, but not showing much of the facility, or showing the facility in a pleasant view making it look welcoming and comfortable. Decide what your subject is supposed to be and really dedicate yourself to that. Personally, the facility i shoot for is inferior to competition, so i typically shoot an image more likely to grab someone's attention for them to read the poster. Here is an example. Overall, awesome image with only a few simple improvements you could make. Well done.