It's a nice photo, nice colors, gorgeous model and nice background. Only things that are bit disturbing to me are maybe too centric composition and bit blurry whole image (lowered clarity?). Overall nice job.
Just my opinion mate, not actually a guy whos supposed to give critiques to other (my photos are still average), i think the pose of the model is not working here. I found it odd yet I don't know why (sorry not that much of a help). And also I do think the photo is to in the middle. I think if you put the model more to the right in the composition the photo would be more flattering. Then again, Its just my opinion. Maybe you have ur reason for the choice you made that I'm not aware of.
I like it. Though I also think that it might have been nicer if she was moved to the right and the archway in the background was to the left of her head. If the background is not important, then shooting at f4 or larger would have been cool.
Nice coloring overall on the photo, lighting is good. However...Background is too prominent and I look at the arch first. Cropping and having the girl on the right side with space in front of her might be more aesthetic. Centric positioning is common when one first starts out. You're beyond that. The red lights on the car on the right side are distracting. The crop would cure that. Nice overall feel and I do get the sense of Prov. since I come from there too. Be careful of shadows that are on the face from the hand - the hand stands out first and the face, in shadow is thrown back. Keep going Danny! You're on the right track...
It's a nice photo, nice colors, gorgeous model and nice background. Only things that are bit disturbing to me are maybe too centric composition and bit blurry whole image (lowered clarity?). Overall nice job.
Perhaps you could make use of the lines and make the subject more interesting. I'm not a fan of the crop either.
(These are just my opinions. I'm not an expert.)
Just my opinion mate, not actually a guy whos supposed to give critiques to other (my photos are still average), i think the pose of the model is not working here. I found it odd yet I don't know why (sorry not that much of a help). And also I do think the photo is to in the middle. I think if you put the model more to the right in the composition the photo would be more flattering. Then again, Its just my opinion. Maybe you have ur reason for the choice you made that I'm not aware of.
Cheers Mate.
I like it. Though I also think that it might have been nicer if she was moved to the right and the archway in the background was to the left of her head. If the background is not important, then shooting at f4 or larger would have been cool.
Oh your out of Prov too? Same
Nice coloring overall on the photo, lighting is good. However...Background is too prominent and I look at the arch first. Cropping and having the girl on the right side with space in front of her might be more aesthetic. Centric positioning is common when one first starts out. You're beyond that. The red lights on the car on the right side are distracting. The crop would cure that. Nice overall feel and I do get the sense of Prov. since I come from there too. Be careful of shadows that are on the face from the hand - the hand stands out first and the face, in shadow is thrown back. Keep going Danny! You're on the right track...