The first one is flawless, just the right amount of furniture etc to tell a story, natural light is great but a little flat in this one if I have to say something about it.
Great relaxed pose on the second one but I find the clutter behind her somewhat distracting.
On the third one her facial expression could be more relaxed and the chandelier that seems to come out of her shoulder could be removed.
Fourth one is perfect, well done!
The fifth one is spectacular, I'm wondering if you could avoided or removed the white halo (reflection on the glass?) in front of her. Might been even better if her right arm wasn't croped or lowered onto her head.
The last is good other than the bright spot above her head.
Very nice work, I'm impressed by your style but I'm also very critical and see little things that could make great images even better.
I like 1,2 & 3 but I feel the addition of the clothing on the shoulder tips it because of the soft light, whites in the background and folds of the material are all combining to create a great piece overall.
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Hi, I'm new on here and was going through the photos...WOW - these are amazing...after reading the comments, and looking at the pictures, I totally agree with Marc...everything he said I was thinking...although, for the second photo, you may want to try adjusting the depth of field and blur the back ground to get rid of the clutter...just my thought..I really like the 4th photo...but maybe I would try to lighten up around the models face to see her hair a litter instead of having it blended into the black abyss..although, I really do like that photo...
Absolutely agree with you. Really nice work. Especially like third down. Natural all the way.
Nice work!
Subjects are posing in a natural way.
The first one is flawless, just the right amount of furniture etc to tell a story, natural light is great but a little flat in this one if I have to say something about it.
Great relaxed pose on the second one but I find the clutter behind her somewhat distracting.
On the third one her facial expression could be more relaxed and the chandelier that seems to come out of her shoulder could be removed.
Fourth one is perfect, well done!
The fifth one is spectacular, I'm wondering if you could avoided or removed the white halo (reflection on the glass?) in front of her. Might been even better if her right arm wasn't croped or lowered onto her head.
The last is good other than the bright spot above her head.
Very nice work, I'm impressed by your style but I'm also very critical and see little things that could make great images even better.
Beautiful work
I like 1,2 & 3 but I feel the addition of the clothing on the shoulder tips it because of the soft light, whites in the background and folds of the material are all combining to create a great piece overall.
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Hi, I'm new on here and was going through the photos...WOW - these are amazing...after reading the comments, and looking at the pictures, I totally agree with Marc...everything he said I was thinking...although, for the second photo, you may want to try adjusting the depth of field and blur the back ground to get rid of the clutter...just my thought..I really like the 4th photo...but maybe I would try to lighten up around the models face to see her hair a litter instead of having it blended into the black abyss..although, I really do like that photo...
The pictues look so natural. Nice work.