Thanks, appreciate the in depth critique. I agree with almost everything.
For the 2nd photo I even have a different crop with the furniture deleted (attaching).
For the 4th photo, I really hate that plant being cut off, but I'm not sure whether I want the whole table deleted. I don't want a home to look like a sterilized studio. I'm seeking for a more natural and "at home" mood.
For the last photos, I'll agree with you about it being a personal choice. I wanted more pronounced, dramatic and natural shadows. I love one light source in general and I, most of the times, try to stay away from the perfect lighting with fill lights and so on. But I'll keep in mind to experiment more with fill light.
Thank you very much, I highly appreciate such elaborations <3
I think 4 and 6 are the strongest images. Four because the lighting nice on her, and the table and plant give a sense of location. Six I like but IMO cropping up from the bottom of the frame makes a better photo. With the shirt and book you are keeping it sexy without showing a lot...then you show a lot.
Hi Danielius. Sharing my expression as fellow student of this art.
Image 1, 2, 3, 4 has some interesting story to tell. The book as prop too has important role to play. If you have deliberately chosen the tile, i am sorry am unable to connect to it.
I feel Image 4 with some innovative lighting + PP + crop has great potential of playing with light and shadow. and again the book...
El ángulo de la 3ª foto me gusta más que el de la primera y segunda, pero las manos y el pelo me gustan más en las dos primeras. También creo que sí hubiera un poco menos de profundidad de campo no haría falta recortes y quedaría como bien dices, la localización más casera, que le da un aire muy sosegado, trasmite tranquilidad.
Son fotos muy bonitas
Last one is my favorite. Nice photos.
Thanks, it's definitely one of my favs too :)
Nice photo shoot!
Thanks!
Thanks, appreciate the in depth critique. I agree with almost everything.
For the 2nd photo I even have a different crop with the furniture deleted (attaching).
For the 4th photo, I really hate that plant being cut off, but I'm not sure whether I want the whole table deleted. I don't want a home to look like a sterilized studio. I'm seeking for a more natural and "at home" mood.
For the last photos, I'll agree with you about it being a personal choice. I wanted more pronounced, dramatic and natural shadows. I love one light source in general and I, most of the times, try to stay away from the perfect lighting with fill lights and so on. But I'll keep in mind to experiment more with fill light.
Thank you very much, I highly appreciate such elaborations <3
I think 4 and 6 are the strongest images. Four because the lighting nice on her, and the table and plant give a sense of location. Six I like but IMO cropping up from the bottom of the frame makes a better photo. With the shirt and book you are keeping it sexy without showing a lot...then you show a lot.
fantastic work.. love it
Natural-clean- simple- good work
Hi Danielius. Sharing my expression as fellow student of this art.
Image 1, 2, 3, 4 has some interesting story to tell. The book as prop too has important role to play. If you have deliberately chosen the tile, i am sorry am unable to connect to it.
I feel Image 4 with some innovative lighting + PP + crop has great potential of playing with light and shadow. and again the book...
cheers
El ángulo de la 3ª foto me gusta más que el de la primera y segunda, pero las manos y el pelo me gustan más en las dos primeras. También creo que sí hubiera un poco menos de profundidad de campo no haría falta recortes y quedaría como bien dices, la localización más casera, que le da un aire muy sosegado, trasmite tranquilidad.
Son fotos muy bonitas