Fashion Critique

To me these have potential but I wouldn't call them "fashion" images necessarily, as the clothes are not presented to full effect. The first shot would work better if it was just the one girl in the light sweater, and some of the shadows were lifted (and maybe shot at a lower aperture to blur out some of the slightly distracting background); I like the portrait, but a longer crop may present the jacket a bit better -- otherwise it's just a portrait (but a nice one). The third photo looks like an outtake. Again, it may have worked if it was just the girl in the foreground, the composition was cutting her off less and the shadows were lifted just a little. But with the other girl's back turned to the camera, hair askew and odd mid-step pose, it doesn't really work for me. Lovely models from what I can tell though.