Having your focus points on the part you want in focus doesn't guarantee that you're in focus. Especially if a subject moves while you're shooting or you move while shooting or both.
Also, if your lens can go to a wider aperture you could drop the background out of focus a little more putting more attention on your models as well as decrease your iso from 3200 so that you don't have so much noise in the shot.
It's crooked and out of focus for starters.
thanks, but i had all the focus points right on the models face,
Having your focus points on the part you want in focus doesn't guarantee that you're in focus. Especially if a subject moves while you're shooting or you move while shooting or both.
Also, if your lens can go to a wider aperture you could drop the background out of focus a little more putting more attention on your models as well as decrease your iso from 3200 so that you don't have so much noise in the shot.