Ruta de las Cascadas

I really liked your second shot with the umbrella. My only thought on it is perhaps tamping down the brightness of where the rain is hitting the cobblestones. It's the brightest section of the image and right next to what I think the focus is and should be, the model with the umbrella. Perhaps it draws the eyes away a little. Maybe slightly reducing the exposure of the rain impact slightly in post. Other than that I really liked the feel of the picture and the saturation.