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Dillan Folkerts's picture

Need Some Feedback

I am doing some head shots for friends and want to know what I need to improve on.

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Very nice bokeh but you need to tone it down in my opinion so that the eye is not diverted by the strong white light., I think you need to lose the shadow under the neck. Its very strong.But otherwise , a nice shot

Looks a bit soft overall. A subtle fill flash here would have been great as well, just giving a little separation on the hair line. Needs to be a little brighter with some contrast.