Looks like a fun location. They are distracting elements in the background. The three-legged crystal thing is drawing a lot of attention, the blinds in the top left and also the dark panel in te middle detract from the photo. You also have a few compositing problems where you removed the stool. Also, the plant was moved and you have some ghosting issues there as will. The HDR processing is overdone for my taste, and the highlights are blown out and shadows too dark. That doll hanging on the wall is interesting.
My suggestions simplify the scene and remove any distracting elements. If it is not adding to the photo it is detracting from it. Not sure who said that but it is sound advice. Make sure the compositing it perfect and easy up on the clarity tool.
Great concept and the location could be amazing with a little clean up. These are hard to pull off, good luck and hope that helps.
Looks like a fun location. They are distracting elements in the background. The three-legged crystal thing is drawing a lot of attention, the blinds in the top left and also the dark panel in te middle detract from the photo. You also have a few compositing problems where you removed the stool. Also, the plant was moved and you have some ghosting issues there as will. The HDR processing is overdone for my taste, and the highlights are blown out and shadows too dark. That doll hanging on the wall is interesting.
My suggestions simplify the scene and remove any distracting elements. If it is not adding to the photo it is detracting from it. Not sure who said that but it is sound advice. Make sure the compositing it perfect and easy up on the clarity tool.
Great concept and the location could be amazing with a little clean up. These are hard to pull off, good luck and hope that helps.