mother daughter shoot

Nice, would like to see more of the girls right hand on the top image, the cropping is a bit too tight. The bottom image of the girl at the waters edge, wondering if you had shot lower so as to open up more of the beach behind her. Well done. :-)

I'm with John and his observations. The only other thing that I think I would add is about your middle image. I can't tell if this was something done intentionally in processing or not, but it looks like a vignette was added to the image, regardless if that's the case or not, the brightest spot in the image is the little girl's shoulder. I would have used a local adjustment to either darken her shoulder, or to brighten the faces of your subjects to give them just a little more emphasis. Super fun shots though!!