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Constructive critique

Exif - nikon D5500
18mm
f8
ISO100
30sec

Any idea or suggestion about these image, whether I could have improved the image. I tried to use the patterns created by the water and the rocks as the leading lines that leads to the sea and the clouds.

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I dont critique other peoples images but what I will say is its a fantastic image. I don't really know where you could improve it but am sure others more talented than myself will advise you. You have I think done what you set out to do. The patterns made by the water and in the sand are fantastic. A nice contrast between light and shadow well done.

Thank you for such kind words. This is really encouraging.
Always trying to be better.

Thats all we can continue to do. Everyday is a school day 👍

Great shot. What do you think ? I like the soft sky and hard rocks.Suits MY taste in composure.

Interesting idea. Thank you.

Beautiful, contrasty image. I wouldn't change a thing!

Thank you so much.

It is worth a gallery showing!! The light sky and the light sand are great and the lines are great as they lead you into the shot. I think it works really well. I am a little confused about what is in the lower left corner though -- is it debris or nets or??? I might have cropped that out as the image is too good and it does not need to be confined to the original image size. I wonder what it would look like if you just cropped out that lower right side so it was just the foam from the waves. Just curious

It was foam, as the waves were still retreating and hence it got a distracting at that part. Thank you so much for pointing out. Loved your suggestion a lot.

I think the brightness in the sky top left is a little too much. It tends to grab the eye immediately which draws you away from the focus of the image. Tru to tone down that area of the sky to the same or slightly less than the brightness in the bottom right of the image. That way the two bright areas will balance each other nicely. The fabulous details in the sand will then grab the eye and lead you up to the rocks. Great Job