This was a photo I did for a photo series project. It was a cool concept in my head, and I still think it’s a cool idea, but I feel that I can portray the idea better. Any constructive criticism and comments would help immensely!
This was a photo I did for a photo series project. It was a cool concept in my head, and I still think it’s a cool idea, but I feel that I can portray the idea better. Any constructive criticism and comments would help immensely!
Interesting concept. I think it could benefit from simplification. Each image has a lot going on that distracts and pulls focus. I'm not entirely sure where the main emphasis should be and then I'm pulled out of the picture by the inclusion of the larger scissors - I think replacing the scissors with a medical device related to surgery might be a better option.
I like the idea. It's unique and very creative. I would probably make a suggestion here that you may or may not consider: Make the bezels/borders of the photographs a little thinner (Or even remove them altogether) would probably bring this image together a little better. I agree with Derrick that the scissors are kind of distracting. Overall a great idea and I would be interested to see what you do with.
Thank you for the feed back! I won’t have access to a dslr again until school starts back up for fall unfortunately :( whenever it does I plan to retry creating this photo!