Nice framing - would be interesting to see it in color. With the b&w I think this could be improved by boosting the whites so you have the full range of tones.
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pdbreske
I know this is an older submission, but I was looking through them and decided to comment.
I agree with Scott about the tones. There is a spike on the left side of the histogram where the blacks are completely blocked up, but the right side of the curve never reaches (or even comes close to) its edge. I made a quick Curves adjustment and I think it helps the overall contrast, although nothing I can do can save the inky blacks from oblivion. Maybe a re-edit on the original could recover some of that detail.
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cotton candy water is a cliche. Do it once and move on.
Nice framing - would be interesting to see it in color. With the b&w I think this could be improved by boosting the whites so you have the full range of tones.
I know this is an older submission, but I was looking through them and decided to comment.
I agree with Scott about the tones. There is a spike on the left side of the histogram where the blacks are completely blocked up, but the right side of the curve never reaches (or even comes close to) its edge. I made a quick Curves adjustment and I think it helps the overall contrast, although nothing I can do can save the inky blacks from oblivion. Maybe a re-edit on the original could recover some of that detail.
cotton candy water is a cliche. Do it once and move on.