My main niggle is that I didn't quite get her to turn her head slightly more towards me so that her right eye was fully exposed, but I just didn't see it at the time. To be fair, the model was standing on stairs above me and to take the photograph at her level I was holding the camera high above my head - while I could see the viewscreen, all I could really tell from it was the rough composition. Maybe next time I'll take a small ladder.
Fujifilm GFX50R, GF 50mm, f/6.4, 1/200, ISO200.
I like the concept for the shot. I agree, a platform that you can stand on could help you see better. Any possibilities of recreating this shot? I quite like what you have here, but it would be interesting to see what might be possible with a better place to stand.
Yeah, most likely I'll go back to this location since I've also used it previously as it's the remains of an old tea-house from 100 years back. I had taken a number of photographs here but this was my favourite of the bunch. Another I quite liked below.