playing with tones to create mood

I am a photographer and i love to experiment with tones in my images. Like all other photographers, i love what i do. i started out knowing nothing and i am still learning. I think its been 8 years since i have been doing photography.

Respectfully, i would like to ask is there anything i can do to improve this image(s) in terms of tones to create mood. I mean i like it/them as is, but any critique is more than welcome.

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Just another opinion. very quick work.

agree, these do look better, although, in the 2nd photo I think that the leaves by the models head could have stayed...

I prefer the second photo, in particular the inclusion of the space above her head and the tree leaves. To me, there is an aura of mystery in this photo.

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