Ian Meyers September 20, 2021 - 11:39 am

Thoughts?

Dr. An headshot

8 Comments

darin gabbert September 20, 2021 - 11:51 am

[Edited]

I like the light. The pose is fine. If I had any issues with this shot is the frame, it seems a bit too long (perhaps crop to the small freckle above her "V" neck). Also, her right shoulder seems to have too much say, it drags my eye away from her face and out of the frame on that side. Do you have room to shift the frame slightly to the left shoulder?

Ian Meyers September 20, 2021 - 5:00 pm

darin gabbert [Edited]

To her left shoulder? I do. I was just trying to keep her face centered in the composition. I’ll play around with it a bit, as well as maybe an 8x10 framing.

darin gabbert September 20, 2021 - 7:30 pm

Ian Meyers

It might be tilt of her head that forces the eye?

Ian Meyers September 20, 2021 - 8:15 pm

darin gabbert

she had her hand on her hip so the shoulders are a bit uneven

Ian Meyers September 20, 2021 - 8:26 pm

darin gabbert

here's the reworked crop, what do you think?

darin gabbert September 21, 2021 - 9:34 am

Ian Meyers [Edited]

I like this crop more. Just bringing the bottom edge up makes a difference.It also seems to reduce the effect that her right shoulder has in the picture. Certainly, it seems more balanced.