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Paulina Jowita Koltun's picture

Malasorte

Digital art

hello to everyone what do you think?

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I like the bold colors and the cat theme. I find the clouds distracting. If the stairs went up to the top of a pillar or stage that could be seen to be up into the sky then they'd work, but having them in midground next to cripsly clear features doesn't work for me.

I hope you have more like this though, as I get a real cool feel overall from it!

thank you

I like the bold colors too, and the cats, also like the woman looking away from the camera towards the stairs. I agree with John D about the clouds. Maybe play with the placement or size of them, or opacity, maybe making them lower to the ground and larger. Nice composition.

thank you

I love the composition you've got going here. I'd maybe look into creating a bigger size deviation between the clouds since it's making the picture feel a bit claustrophobic. Maybe add a cloud behind the wall on top of the stairs near the cat that is slightly peeking out to add a level of dimension to the image. There's a vibe of surrealism I really enjoy about this. Good stuff.

thank you very much ;)