Inspired by photographers such as Lee Jeffries I wanted to make portraits that show the human factor. Not a snapshot or just a pretty face. An image that respects the model and stirs an emotion in the viewer. This image was taken with a nikon D610 and a wonderful nikon prime lens 85 mm 1:1.8 D. I use a large front window that reflects indirect light from the hospital parking lot. I am humbled by that wonderful images that this group provides and would be grateful for any constructive input you can share.
The first is great, the second is even better!
You wanted to stir emotion in the viewer, and I think you accomplished that beautifully.