This is an experiment in combining images of a similar theme to strengthen the story
In this case I used two images - one of a dilapidated house (which was demolished a week later) on which I superimposed and image of a row of prison cells, captured at the defunct Eastern Stare Penitentiary.
I'd love to hear feedback - does the layering elevate the base image or detract from it, do you feel the story/associations bring anything to the table?
I hope if nothing else this this will provide fodder to feed engaging discussions. All opinions, whether newcomer or veteran are appreciated and valued.
.Update 1/18/20
If interested in seeing the original images and the story behind visit my blog entry; https://www.alanbrownphotography.com/blog/2020/1/18/condemned-sum-of-the...
Hum.. Interesting. Took me a moment to figure out what was going on even after reading your description. I believe it can work and tell a great story but might need some tweaking.
What happens if you shift the end of the prison cell perspective to the front door of the house instead of the window, and shaped it to the side of the door? That could be very impactful with meaning.
Just my 2 cents of course. :)
VERY INTERESTING! I love this. This is a favorite for me. The way the cell row looks like it goes into the house is great.
Since you mention working on storytelling, here is what this image says to me. I go straight to the story idea that the house/life could be like prison to the residents. And that isolation and being "trapped" would be personal so even those living together are each in their own personal emotional cell. And this prison goes straight into the heart of the home.
You balance the composition really well too.
My only quandary, which we will never know the answer to, is if I would have recognized the prison row if you hadn't said what it is. Well never know! But I gotta tell you Alan, I really really like this one.
More please!
Wow, thanks for you feedback Ruth. I suspected from the outset that this might create a variety of feedback, it's great to see you so engaged.
I totally agree on the story being important for the understanding of the image. I found it hard to bring out the clarity of the prison cells without overpowering the underlying picture of the house.
I also wonder though if the 'hidden message' might increase the attraction - I enjoy thought-provoking images where the viewer is encouraged to analyze to determine the true meaning, perhaps the story provides the final clue?
I love the way you have built your own story around this appreciate your sharing of that - it only goes to display your insight and creativity.
Hey Ruth, if interested see the updated description - that has a link to my blog entry with the story and original images.
Really like this. very captivating. I wonder how it would go if the house layer was converted to b&w an then inverted, then the cells added without conversion. Endless possibilities with both the photos. Thanks
Thanks for engaging Bruce. I have a b&h version but like your idea of experimenting with the layers. More food for thought.