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Wabenaki Totem

More experimentation. This features a totem pole from the Western Abenaki tribe in the North East of the US.

This end result comes from selectively blending and masking of a series of 20 images. The challenge here was to preserve the detailed carvings, as this would typically be lost by the technique.

All comments welcomed, I'd especially like to understand what works/does not work for you, improvements you might suggest.

Update 5/17/20
Based on feedback I have reworked the Eagle in image #2. Further comments?

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I really love this image, but I don't like the fact that the eagle at the top is blurred. The rest of the totem is so crisp, it almost feels like a let-down. The rest of the image is superb. Great colors and painted effect on the background, but the top being lost to blur loses me.

Thanks Matthew, I really appreciate your willingness to be critical, more so being the first!
TBH the eagle caused me problems and was a concern - the fact you were drawn to this area reinforces that thought and I'll plan to revisit.

The fact you enjoyed the rest of the image gives me hope.

It's a beautiful image. The other carvings all point up, so them being so crisp, it sets an expectation for my eyes. I follow them up the totem only to find . . . a blurry eagle. I can't wait to see what you do with it. I love the grass, it has ripples and swirls that make my eye study it for more. Your backgrounds are getting better the more you work on this method. Keep up the good work!

Thanks Matthew. I'm not sure if the latest image will fill that craving. The problem lies in the overlaying of multiple images from different angles. There's not much that can be done at the edges without removing the effect.

This is so interesting! I love that the grass looks like water - it even appears to have ripples. Reed leaned over while I was looking at this, checked this out and said "That's Cool"! High praise. ::)

Thanks Ruth, I find your comments on the grass interesting. This is the result of moving between shots.

I was hoping the dandelions would help produce some sort of texture - I think they do add a little to the otherwise 'sea of green'.

BTW - Reed has really good taste (must take after Mom).

I agree with Matthew on this one. Honestly I see nothing wrong other than the eagle, but on the other hand I see the freedom that opens up from the burry eagle. If the eagle was clear I think the picture wouldn’t feel the same, as all the other edges are blurry just enough for the image to be interesting and curious to the eye.

Thanks Chloe, I can't say I disagree with any of your thoughts.
This I what makes this group so important - I'll use your/other feedback and along with my own look to improve the image.

I think sharpening the eagle helped. ;)

I'll second that!

I agree!

Thanks all - I thing there's still a little work still to be done on this but thanks for your input - that has certainly helped improve the image.