The model/friend was a good choice as was her dress. I'm not sure if this is my personal or professional preference, that said, I would like to have seen more tension between the model struggling physically or existentially with increased vines around her. The use if the vines was a good idea and is accentuated with the old rusty seemingly abandoned green house.
Of course there is the caveat I don't know what you had to work with by way of 'longer' vines or not. :)
The second photo I would crop from the left about 1/8th or so. This purpose is to bring the primary focus on the model.
Maybe her hair might have been better flying in the air. Not sure.
Would have been fun to have vines flying from her body as if she's escaping. Then the hair comment is moot. That would provide greater continuity to your story.
I see the vines growing across the window frames without windows. There is all sorts of fun you can have with that.
Sub Themes - Good and Evil
Garden of Eden between innocence and awareness
Struggle vs submission
Within these themes it's possible to bring out her sensuality.
I love the atmosphere and feel of these, and the way the model stands out from the background especially because of her dress, it's great :)
thank you so much :)
The model/friend was a good choice as was her dress. I'm not sure if this is my personal or professional preference, that said, I would like to have seen more tension between the model struggling physically or existentially with increased vines around her. The use if the vines was a good idea and is accentuated with the old rusty seemingly abandoned green house.
Of course there is the caveat I don't know what you had to work with by way of 'longer' vines or not. :)
The second photo I would crop from the left about 1/8th or so. This purpose is to bring the primary focus on the model.
Maybe her hair might have been better flying in the air. Not sure.
Would have been fun to have vines flying from her body as if she's escaping. Then the hair comment is moot. That would provide greater continuity to your story.
I see the vines growing across the window frames without windows. There is all sorts of fun you can have with that.
Sub Themes - Good and Evil
Garden of Eden between innocence and awareness
Struggle vs submission
Within these themes it's possible to bring out her sensuality.
Wow...can I come and play!? LOL
I quite like what you've shot.