For my personal taste... 1st image (leaning on wall), I would have moved the DOF a little further back to center her in the in focus part and not have the attention drawn to the bricks at the left/front of the image. 2nd image, I like to overall shot, composition and posing but I would like to have the face not be so bright, I might have stopped down a half (or full) stop to get the face correct and not worried about the background darkening. 3rd image, the focus is on the frog not the model. The 4th image, through the glass, is the best shot here - nailed it! I wouldn't change a thing (lighting, composition, clarity, all good). 5th shot - my eye is drawn to her sleeve. I like the shot of her, just find the sleeve distracting.
Overall though. Great series of images. Good lighting and posing. Keep it up.
Keep up the good work. I like them all...though the frog seems more in focus than the model in one. The tricky pic behind glass works well. Good job.
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For my personal taste... 1st image (leaning on wall), I would have moved the DOF a little further back to center her in the in focus part and not have the attention drawn to the bricks at the left/front of the image. 2nd image, I like to overall shot, composition and posing but I would like to have the face not be so bright, I might have stopped down a half (or full) stop to get the face correct and not worried about the background darkening. 3rd image, the focus is on the frog not the model. The 4th image, through the glass, is the best shot here - nailed it! I wouldn't change a thing (lighting, composition, clarity, all good). 5th shot - my eye is drawn to her sleeve. I like the shot of her, just find the sleeve distracting.
Overall though. Great series of images. Good lighting and posing. Keep it up.