Rainy day

I shot this picture on a summer evening. using a garden hose to create the rain.
Any thoughts?

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Hi Kaeye, I really like this, there's a filmic quality to it. Only one thing bothering me slightly, the drainpipe on the right needs to be vertical OR just crop out the drainpipe and window all together. This would take your subject out of centre and almost at 2/3rds and draw focus to her, which would look better to me. Other than that, I think there's a story here that I'd like to see more of, perhaps make it a small series? :)

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Ha! how could I miss the blue sky?

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