Trying my hand at something a little different
I am trying something new, and would appreciate any critique that you have. Thank you ahead of time.
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Dan Stiel
Dining Room at Sunset. Taliesin West
Evening just after sunset at Taliesin West. Scottsdale, Arizona. View of the dining room & bell tower.
Hector Reyes
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
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Last: Jul 14, 2026
Hector Reyes
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
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Failed composition, Image haze, Out of focus, or distorted images: D-
I like what you are doing, if I could critique these, I would say they need some element in focus, something that will draw the viewer in, at the moment they would make for a cool wallpaper on your screen. They have an ambience that lends itself to that. But to make it a photo in itself I would give the eye something to rest on while exploring the rest of the image. Presently, the eye wanders over the entire image with out a pause anywhere.
Great job, and well done for stretching your limits.