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Lolu Ogunlewe's picture

Comments and Criticism

Hi all,

New to the group and first time poster. I finally have some images I'm not ashamed to post but I know I can still do better. Any comments & criticism would be appreciated on the following images.

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2 Comments

Matt Hooker's picture

Welcome to the group Lolu! Here's my feedback for your six photos:

1: the model looks to be a little bit off-center. I feel like her hands are too important in the composition to be as out of focus as they are. I think a little smaller on the aperture would not affect the background too adversely. overall, I like this

2: I really like this photo, especially how her leg becomes a leading line. I would just trim off that dark whatever it is on the left edge of the frame.

3: the centering is off, and the chromatic aberrations on the table are very pronounced.

4: might just be the cheap screen I'm looking on, but the tint seems to be a bit far into magenta, and her hand is chopped off awkwardly.

5: over the shoulder poses can be difficult, but I think you nailed this one. however, I think the white balance could do with some warming, and the exposure levels adjusted a bit so the sun on the building doesn't distract from the model.

6: centering is off, which is resulting in one half-cropped arm. also, I'm note sure about the model's expression. it seems almost confrontational

Lolu Ogunlewe's picture

HI Matt,

Thanks kindly for all the feedback, you have no idea how much I appreciate it. I'll have to share some of my more recent images.