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Lolu Ogunlewe's picture

C&C Requested

Hi all,

I'm constantly trying to grow my skills so I like periodic feedback on my shots.

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#1: Everything about the model I really like. The background alignment is distractingly off to me. The colors in the background are faded and almost pastel in contrast to the model. That may be on purpose and that's great if for contrast, just something to think about if you didn't.

#2: Just wow. only thing I would change is 'shopping out the line from the (doors?) that's going through the top of her head.

#3: I like the pose. See how the image looks with some rotation so that she's leaning forward a little. The frame seems to want to go that way, even if not so far as making the stone seat level. Also with the extreme highlights behind the fountain there's some green fringing.