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Dining Room at Sunset. Taliesin West
Evening just after sunset at Taliesin West. Scottsdale, Arizona. View of the dining room & bell tower.
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
Raining again
Night, on a street from Bucharest
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
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Hello Vijay, I would like to comment on your image: I like the subject matter and also the color tones. The way the structure of the leaves show up by shooting against the light is very good, and in this respect I don´t mind the lilys themselves being completely "silhouettet" - in fact this make the photo interesting. What I would do is work a little on the composition itself: I would have tried to shoot the image by moving a bit to the left. This way, the lily to the left would not have part of that circular leaf directly behind it, which is a distraction. I would also have gone down lower with the camera, making the lilys stand out, or stand higher, in the frame, thus giving more attention to them. So basically a bit to the left and down with the camera. Good luck and keep on shooting (photos)!
Hi Heiko, appreciating your suggestions. will process again and also experiment more at the field.