Prone to wander..
I’m just a rookie looking for some helpful tips/advice.
Anyone have any ideas about how you would have improved this image (specifically in the edit)?
Shot with a Nikon D5300 with a 50mm lens.
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Hi Nathan, let me start by saying that I'm definitely not a pro so I'll just offer my thoughts on your image.
I find my eye in a tug of war, first settling on the brightest part of the image with the walking figure, and then being led away by the leasing lines of the rails.
I tried zooming in and came up with a tighter crop which emphasizes the figure and frames it with the rails instead of the rails leading my eye away.
Hope this helps...
Regards,
Mike