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Hello My name is Patrick, I'm a fashion, and portrait photographer based in Miami. Joining this group to get motivated and to get any helpful tips and tricks.

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Hi there! I like the vibe in these shots. The lighting is very flattering on her. The main things that I think could be improved are the giant distracting Starbucks logo in the background of the first image, and the tree growing out of her head / also distracting background of the second. Another thing to consider is the model's legs in the second shot, they're wide enough apart to be a bit awkward (and eh, crotch shots...)

I bet the model is thrilled with them. Hope this helps. :)

Glad you like it, and thanks for the tips. Now that you say that i cant not see the logo more..lol Yes she loves the pictures. I have to work more on on directing the model, instead of just letting them pose.