Created this image at the SD zoo. I have an annual pass so Im able to take a free guest. I decided to bring a model and shoot around the park, going for an overall safari/zoo vibe. After hastily hopping on the bus around the park, I was soon happy with my decision to ride the bus. Let me know what you thing. Also YES, the image is a little soft because the focus was slightly off.
Hey, David
Since you're in the Fashion group, I was expecting the image to be more about the outfits. Her knee being up like that blocks her shirt.
Below are just a few example ideas showing the outfits while sitting down.
1. https://www.instagram.com/p/B1bsRwqnjx0/
2. https://www.instagram.com/p/BlEGUCVDTum/
3. https://www.instagram.com/p/BeMzgEwlZF_/
Additionally, since you were going for a safari/zoo vibe, maybe she could have been holding binoculars, camera, map, 400mm f2.8 (haha), etc.
Also, maybe not have so much headroom. And, lastly, not include that red bar/brace on the right.