Would love to read your comments here. Thank you!

Two-dimensionally this image works well. The luminosity, color contrast, geometry, and form are all great. Kudos for shooting telephoto too! The crux is the context in three-dimensions. It's an in-betweener that doesn't place the home in a clear dominant position, due to obstructions and the amount of space given to the neighboring Tudor:

All leading lines point to the stone chimney of the neighboring home. Keep in mind the plane that's most straight on with the camera is likely to be the one the eye will rest on.

Secondly, having an unlit cold walled off 'ground' emotionally isn't inviting. I know that was probably a limitation rather than choice, but grass is always greener ;-)

For these high up homes, I typically pull out a drone right after sunset or hit it closer from the yard and flash away.

Thanks for sharing!

I think it's a great shoot in general. But commercial wise. You have 2 houses in the frame. Unless this was the point to show 2 properties of the same architect in one picture, I think you missed the "big picture"