Hi Azmi, thank you for sharing your work and open to comments. First off, the subject (eye hospital) is a challenging environment even for those with a great deal of experience. I agree with Michael's comments, it appears you utilized ambient lighting, you might try utilizing off camera flash (high power pointed straight up close to the ceiling to utilize the large white space as a reflector). Also for the floor and wall reflections, try using a circular polarizing filter to tune out the glares. Otherwise keep pushing yourself :)
Hi Azmi,
Nice work but same as Michael need to make more color correction on the images to look more even, also you need to fix the vertical lines to be same even and your aperture need to be more close so you can have a nice star on the lights.
just my personal opinion.
Greetings.
Your basic views are fine. The corrections are details.
Color: Shoot Raw and take a few exposures to have frames that balance bright and dark areas. Correct for the color casts and layer the images to blend the elements.
You can use flash however you will need to make a number of exposures and blend them as you cannot hide the lights in large, open spaces. Also a large space needs a ton of lights. Flash also creates the additional concern of glare off some surfaces that needs to be eliminated by another exposure exposing it correctly.
One significant advantage of flash is the greater color accuracy of fabric and other materials as opposed to varied light sources that have non linear color responses.
Rather than doing the extra work of color correcting, try not mixing those conflicting light sources. I can tell you either used a slow shutter or hdr, because of the haze around light sources. Using either of those methods will tend to amplify white balance issues. Try setting your white balance before the shot and if there's multiple light sources with diff temps, make sure to get a reading under each.
too blue, could be color corrected better. You are pointing the camera down. It is better to lower the camera but keep it level. Try it.
Hi Azmi, thank you for sharing your work and open to comments. First off, the subject (eye hospital) is a challenging environment even for those with a great deal of experience. I agree with Michael's comments, it appears you utilized ambient lighting, you might try utilizing off camera flash (high power pointed straight up close to the ceiling to utilize the large white space as a reflector). Also for the floor and wall reflections, try using a circular polarizing filter to tune out the glares. Otherwise keep pushing yourself :)
Hi Azmi,
Nice work but same as Michael need to make more color correction on the images to look more even, also you need to fix the vertical lines to be same even and your aperture need to be more close so you can have a nice star on the lights.
just my personal opinion.
Greetings.
Your basic views are fine. The corrections are details.
Color: Shoot Raw and take a few exposures to have frames that balance bright and dark areas. Correct for the color casts and layer the images to blend the elements.
You can use flash however you will need to make a number of exposures and blend them as you cannot hide the lights in large, open spaces. Also a large space needs a ton of lights. Flash also creates the additional concern of glare off some surfaces that needs to be eliminated by another exposure exposing it correctly.
One significant advantage of flash is the greater color accuracy of fabric and other materials as opposed to varied light sources that have non linear color responses.
Rather than doing the extra work of color correcting, try not mixing those conflicting light sources. I can tell you either used a slow shutter or hdr, because of the haze around light sources. Using either of those methods will tend to amplify white balance issues. Try setting your white balance before the shot and if there's multiple light sources with diff temps, make sure to get a reading under each.