Your critiques creative people!
Shots I have took in a hotel in dubai, I havent done some cleaning to the bathroom glass in the first image due to fast editing :)
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try something new: Deepscape
...was the challenge some weeks / months ago. I did: approaching the topic "deepscape".
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Last: Sep 09, 2026
Hector Reyes
Iria sitting on my car
As we were planning our shoot, Iria said she needed a swimwear look. I wanted lifestyle with my car. We compromised. I think it turned out great. Hope you like it.
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Colin Andersson-Hamill
Von der Decken's Hornbill
A bird I have not come across before. In my ignorance I just assumed it was a variety of Toucan.
I feel fortunate to have ben able to capture it with my lens.
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Very nicely composed, but (depending on what the images will be used for) too dark. Also, I would have removed the star flares. The bed in image 3 could use a bit more styling too. Looks like a room I'd want to stay in though!
Agree with you, I think the 3rd shot needs alot of work and not to the level of the other 2, thanks for the feedback Colin!
No problem. Thanks for sharing.
You've nailed the straight lines which is tough for architectural photographers.
What I think is missing are the midtones. If you open up this image and view the histogram I think you'll see spikes at both ends with nothing in the middle.
With no window light and hot spotlights, exposure bracketing isn't going to help because it just makes the hot spots hotter. You would need a couple flash pops to create some mid tones and then use exposure blending to combine both images.
Interesting, thanks for the feedback
I agree with Colin Robertson and Daniel L Miller . The lines look really good--kudos on the head-on compositions. I think the camera height is good too. Especially the third photo--most of the time I see that composition with the camera too low which would distort the bed. One suggestion, in your final submission to your client, I would include mid-way photo of number one, meaning step into the bedroom area to reduce the depth and eliminate the hall and bath. Make sure you have at least a 20mm for that one.
Why not....thanks for the feedback