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Lisa VonLuehrte's picture

Would love to hear feedback!

Over the past 2 years I've gotten into Architectural Photography and the other day created my first solid twilight exterior shot. I'm eager to hear constructive criticism. Please and thank you!

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This is just amazing....not an expert but maybe crop from the bottom a little bit because the stairs and the bathtub looks big and the house looks small(and panoramas are interesting for this dramatic lighting)..keep up the good work Lisa

I definitely would have de-cluttered a bit before shooting this. Also, the house should be a more prominent part of the frame. Maybe try framing this from behind the pool, rather than the hot tub. Also, the interior is super orange... Do you have the ability to trigger flashes remotely in those rooms? That way you can have the camera set to daylight and the flashes will match. Otherwise, it has a nice sky and you did a nice job illuminating the exterior finishes and trees.

Great technique but I agree with others about clutter and viewpoint.
Here is a crop suggestion. The spa only needs to be referenced, not featured.
I would have also put a candle on the table at right to tie it to the house and keep the eye moving in a circle around the composition.

I like this image for real estate, but not for what one might consider "architectural photography" since your main subject is arguably the jacuzzi tub.