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Comments and critiques welcome!

An afternoon shot of the newly constructed "One City Center" plaza, located in downtown Durham, NC.
Shot on the Canon 5d mkIV with TSE-24.

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Allen you should share this image with the architectural firm, I'm sure they'd appreciate it.

I love that lens…couldn't do my work without it. Can you share what amount of tilt/shift you used.

The only comment I have is the heavy vignette creeped into the building itself, reducing your shadow detail at the top. Other than that it's a great pic!

Daniel, Thak you so much for taking the time to offer your critique and your kind words! I usually use about 10mm of shift, and believe that is what I did here.
You are very correct, I got a bit heavy handed with the vignette.... I will defiantly fix that. Thank you!

Excellent shot.
The only thing I would have changed is to take a series of exposures to collect passersby in different positions and then layer the files to arrange the walkers without overlaps such as exists that in the lower right.
I agree with Daniel, that you should share the image with the architect. Only if you want to get hired though. ;)

Indy, Thank you very much for your comments and critique!
I did actually comp 4 exposures for the pedestrians, and you are probably right, I could use a few more exposures. The overlapping couple is a good catch, and I will watch out for that next time! Thank you!