Both look very nice. I like the exposure & colour tones too. Good work. Just a couple comments.
1) It looks like there is just a tiny bit of vertical distortion. I'm looking at the far left pole connecting the two hallways and the far right pole just next to the guy in the grey t-shirt. Both are leaning a bit to the right. But, your horizontals look great. It'd be great if there were no people, but totally understand if not possible.
2) Maybe tone down the highlights or recover some detail from the RAW file on that top right corner of the building. And, perhaps step slightly more to the left to get more of the main building in the frame and the other building out of the frame. Just my humble opinion that you don't need that building to the right to be in the photo.
Thanks for sharing your cool work. Looks like a fab building.
This is a fantastic building and your shots do capture its essence. The interior shot does a good job of showing all that is going on with the structure. However I believe there are some shots within this shot, showing closer details, that could help telling a better story of the space and interior of the building.
The exterior shot, is nice and I do agree with Mark about moving more to the left, cutting out the building to the right and cutting down the exposure. If you can go back and get an exterior shot again and try to go on a cloudy day. I believe clouds in the sky would help.
Overall keep up the good work.
Both look really well done! Love the colour. You clearly know what you’re doing!
Both look very nice. I like the exposure & colour tones too. Good work. Just a couple comments.
1) It looks like there is just a tiny bit of vertical distortion. I'm looking at the far left pole connecting the two hallways and the far right pole just next to the guy in the grey t-shirt. Both are leaning a bit to the right. But, your horizontals look great. It'd be great if there were no people, but totally understand if not possible.
2) Maybe tone down the highlights or recover some detail from the RAW file on that top right corner of the building. And, perhaps step slightly more to the left to get more of the main building in the frame and the other building out of the frame. Just my humble opinion that you don't need that building to the right to be in the photo.
Thanks for sharing your cool work. Looks like a fab building.
This is a fantastic building and your shots do capture its essence. The interior shot does a good job of showing all that is going on with the structure. However I believe there are some shots within this shot, showing closer details, that could help telling a better story of the space and interior of the building.
The exterior shot, is nice and I do agree with Mark about moving more to the left, cutting out the building to the right and cutting down the exposure. If you can go back and get an exterior shot again and try to go on a cloudy day. I believe clouds in the sky would help.
Overall keep up the good work.
lovely place to visit - good captures